Like you yourself said, it's nothing original...
But you play fast, hard and you how metalcore should sound...
If you are to add vocals try someone whos can do like everything:
grunts for the breaks, screams for the fast melodic parts and piggysqueals
for extra effects!!! That would totally kick arse!!!
Since i like the very heavy music (i play death metal as well! => check my song it'll be up sometime shortly)! It's very cool! Nice guitarwork, plain but very efficient drumming and the slow solo's really add to the versatility and the change of moods within the song! Too bad it didn't have any vocals! That's why i couldn't give a 10!!!
This is the non-vocal version. :/
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